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for Against All Odds

by Martine

person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean with the spelling thing -_-;; lol. Either way, it was anice chapter ^^ Short, yes, but nice. I was pleasently surprised when I saw it. I like the fact tht is was ine someone elses POV this time, since it adds alot to the story. Your decriprions are nice too. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more of this story from you.
person Drew
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please cont, Darien is great character, wonder about this blue eyed boy.
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honest Feedback: The summary has ‘your’ where you should have ‘you’re’.
person Mayo
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Damien!
He's just so sarcastic'n'shit.
Emo much? o-O
LOVE IT. PLEASE CONTINUE
:]
person Mayo
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damien..?
Wtf.
I meant Darien.
GROWLLL. i read too many stories.
Get characters mixed up, I do.
>:[
person alexa87
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really great. I hope that you will update soon.;)
person thuyhy
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh .please update , it's a very long time , Ilike this story
person SimoneV
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i cracked up at the line with \'i\'m glad you decided to dress normal\' XDDDDDDD well, he dresses like me, only I\'m a girl, so whahahahahahahaha. This is really interesting, i\'ll be keeping an eye on updates ^^
person foamy
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE WTF! write some more :DDD this is awesome! what happens at school eh??
person schen
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, when are you going to update? i\'m dying to know who\'s the tall, blue-eyed guy... mou