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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thaaaaaaaaat waaaaaaaaaaaas thaaaaaaaaaaa SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT i want to kill my mother all the time now i just read this whenever i feel like that because the suicide idea isnt so good for me because i do not like pain but the kill my mother part YES YES YES.............dear lord i think i just nutted in my draws'........
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hatred is her motive, but what kind of horrors happened to this girl to make her so twisted? Or is just her personality? Spaces between sentences would be nice so it does not all ramble together. When you type these, are you typing them in a word program first? It would find many things in there for you that you have left out.
This was dark and sadistic, with no feeling at all except for disgust. You may one day have talent as a writer, but first you have to think out what it is you are writing. Try again, put those spaces in there, and tell us WHY her mother has turned her into this dark ball of hatred, instead of just explaining to us the death. It will leave people uninterested.
This was dark and sadistic, with no feeling at all except for disgust. You may one day have talent as a writer, but first you have to think out what it is you are writing. Try again, put those spaces in there, and tell us WHY her mother has turned her into this dark ball of hatred, instead of just explaining to us the death. It will leave people uninterested.