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loved it, jason needs to see that he cant just be with her when tis convinent for him, cause other people would NOT mind taking his place.

I have been reading this story ever since it appeared on aff, and I must say that it is one of my favorites. Your writing style is wonderfull, and this story is so interesting and fun to read, it\'s hard to put down (or rather, exit). Keep writing! (o_-)

awww! i feel bad for jason!!!!!!!! great chapter, update soon.

please update!

I love love love this story (:

I love this story and I think Savvy should be Jason\'s nurse... I don\'t like this Mike... he\'s getting in the way... and I\'ll be mad if he does anything to Savvy plus I wanna see what\'s happing with Jason and his feelings for Savvy and if he\'ll ever admit it! Please Hurry and update!

LOL Jason totally deserved that. As always, great chapter!

Hi, there. :)

So I\'ve noticed that you get plenty of reviews, daily, and here\'s mine, added to the mix.

I\'d like to compliment and critique your work of fiction. It\'s nicely written, not excellent, but good. When it comes to the surroundings of your characters, you leave plenty to the imagination, but when it comes to the erotic scenes, you take the time to be as thorough as possible. That\'s a negative and a positive - but then, for those readers who just don\'t care about detail being put into everything, it\'s a double positive. :)

I find your characters to be intriguing, as well, and the relationships you\'ve created around the two main characters, Jason and Savannah. Now, I\'d be lying if I didn\'t say it didn\'t make me laugh at the incredulity, because it does. You\'ve created an atmosphere around the two that makes for a nice, dramatic flare and fling. Although, I must say that I don\'t care for Jason\'s character very much. Don\'t get me wrong, it\'s perfect for him, and, it would seem, quite a few of your readers, but his actions and reactions, and what he allows to happen to Savannah, in my humble opinion, is unacceptable. Though, Savannah must be either a glutton for punishment, or she\'s so much infatuated with Jason, that she will in fact let him do anything to her. After all, she stated right before he let Jack and Rich take part in a nasty gang-rape-like session, that she trusted him.

I do have to say I liked Mrs. Haisley\'s character quite a bit. She told it like it was, and basically scoffed when denial was put in place. She obviously wore the pants in the relationship, which was refreshing after all the domineering that Jason displayed over Savannah in all the chapters before, not to mention all the chapters after. I find nothing wrong with the B/s situations, or the master-slave relationships, but to me, the way Jason handled Savannah got repetitive and irritating.

I also liked the introduction of Mike, into the story. His presence seems to be a somewhat grounding factor, but the crazyness probably won\'t stop, just because he\'s shown up. If anything, it\'ll probably get worse. Personally, I would rather see Savannah end up with Mike at the end of this story, but the way you\'ve written it seems that she\'ll stick with Jason to the end, which I find unfortunate. ;p Buuut, it is your story, and as the author, you\'ll write it out as you wish it.

Well, for now, that\'s all I\'ve got to say about your pieces of fiction. A nice work you\'ve got going. I know you\'ve already got your characterization set, but I hope to see a bit of a change. Especially in Savannah\'s willingness to let Jason play around with her and humilate her, as well as Jason\'s mean streak.

Well, thanks for takin\' the time to look over my criticisms. :)

~Lis\'

let it be Savannah. Oh please. Vegeance is so sweet. and mike proved his point

I\'ve been reading this ever since you started posting it, and i\'ve got to tell you, I\'ve loved every word. I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next!