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fairy. i\'d go with fairy. btw, luv the story, it totally rox. and i seriously hope jason\'s fantasy will be acted out! ;)

Heya, i think she should go as the pirate with mike it would make Jason so mad it would be funny....and plus Cherry could get her way ;p it could lead to a million interesting different situations!

Lets get mike to hook up wit savvy =P

love ur story, oly thing is im not a big fan of savy kinda acting more like a whore, i thought it would be more about her and jason btu w/e

ahhh! must get jason/savvy back together....i just...i dont like Mike...at all...

I\'d go wtih schoool girl.

Great update :)

C

I\'m really enjoying this story...it\'s sassy and racy but none of the smut seems gratuitous, you know? It has a purpose (even if it\'s just getting one of the characters off, but isn\'t that one of sex\'s main goals anyways???). Plus I like your characters a lot. Savvy is just so sweet but not overly so and it\'s really nice to see her developing into her potential as a sexually active woman and growing into her confidence. I really like Mike too though I\'m way too in love with the Javvy (see you have a shipper!) to root for him and Savannah, though I\'m not completely opposed to a threesome ; ) I adore Cherry, I get that she might come off a bit slutty sometimes but she\'s just enjoying herself and I think deep down under all that dominatrix persona she\'s built she\'s got a good heart. Now to Jason..what to say about him? Well nothing more than I\'m totally in love! Uff, he\'s perfect in that badass guy who only needs a nudge in the right direction by the right woman to become prince charming way and I can\'t help but feel all hot and bothered when you mention him, specially now that you\'re building his background and we get to see he isn\'t just a jerk who chases after every skirt he meets for the sake of it. And that bit about him wanting to be gay? Priceless if a bit sad. Well I\'m loving it all and I\'d really really love you forever if you could update real soon but take your time cause it\'s been coming great so far. Kuddos on the amazing job again!

I dunno why but I hate reading about them at the Haisley\'s.

*breathes out* OMG I read this whole story in one sitting, and it\'s EXCELLENT. So descriptive and erotic...*sqwee* I love it so much! I don\'t have time to write a long review, but I have a suggestion. You should totally make Savannah ask Jason to make out/a bit more with Mike. *melts* Just a suggestion. <3

Really loved the story. Can\'t wait tell next chapter. please update soon. really wants to know what happens. keep up the great writing.

you\'re good at writing :)