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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! Something REAL from Jason! I\'m glad to see him coming around finally.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story keeps getting better. can\'t wait tell next chapter. I hope Jason don\'t break things off and tells savvy his feelings.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok---> now mike can just go away...yep i like that idea:)
Great chapter
Great chapter
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapters 16 and 17 and loved both! The latest chapter in particular was quite amazing; it was erotic and emotional all at the same time. I think you\'ve written Jason\'s inner struggle quite well and I\'m glad he\'s perilously close to admitting how he feels about Savannah.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what about a period costume??
but funk it up abit ~ maybed make it a sheer type material for the skirt and sleaves but have a properly boned corset for the body??
with bare feet?
or high heel?
anyway loving the story
love liljo
but funk it up abit ~ maybed make it a sheer type material for the skirt and sleaves but have a properly boned corset for the body??
with bare feet?
or high heel?
anyway loving the story
love liljo
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think savvy should wear the pirate costume i luv the story feep up the good work
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so torn!!! While it appears as though Jason truly wants her, Mike would be good for her. Maybe both?
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok is anying thinkings something a little different. not a nun or angel or devil cop or anything common how about a warrior princess. not xena skimpier more Gabrieal in her warrior stage skimpy sexy and stronger than anything savvy usually wears.plus it goes with the her that is trying to prove to Jason she wants him. oh and the weapon could be used in the eventual sex with whoever she sleeps with that night.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want her costume to match Jason\'s! Ahhh I don\'t like this Mike man, get him away!!! Bad Savannah for thinking such things about him! Only Jason... whaaa I want Jason and Savvy again! Pwease!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon and bring jason and savannah toghter
bye bye
bye bye