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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Setryochi
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... I\'m not into hardcore bondage or anything, but this story is interesting. I like the love triangle between mike, savvy and jason. Though... I have to say I\'m disappointed that Savvy has had so many partners so soon. I guess that\'s strange to think about. I would also think that someone who didn\'t want to be thought of as a slut would have said no. At the same time I like this story alot and I want you to continue with it. I really want to know the story behind Savvy, Jason\'s story has already been told but we don\'t know anything really about Savvy except that she\'s insecure and likes to be the victem. Well, hope to find out soon, keep up the good work.

P.S. I\'m especially impressed with how you\'ve managed to stay mature with this subject. (Most people sound like 12 yr. olds. when describing sex scenes, and more often when it involves more than two people.)

Set-chan
person DangSpiffy
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m going to admit, theres not alot of storys that keep me as hooked as this one has, I usually just read a story and forget it halfway through, but I return to this one every week to catch up, and see if you\'ve written more, I\'m addicted, and it\'s so good, it\'s like a great book you can\'t put down.


Please give us more soon, because it\'s wonderfull.
person Anomlov
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo cute I loved the ending. PLease write the next chapter. Us readers need to see what happens!
person Nem
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... Very nice chapter. I liked the threesome, but I want more Mike :) and more Jason and Savannah too, of course :)
person l\"etje
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very nice keep going and please let him confess his love for her
post soon
person the_true_Silver
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i agree... that\'s a nice ending to this chapter.... so fluffy!!! so sweet... you have a perfect combination of smut and fluff... update soon1!

Silver
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Awesome! Mike action! But poor Jason. I\'m really loving the way you\'re setting this story up.
person Yumi
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful *wipes tear* bravo! hahaha I love this story, keep updating =]
person Neji.s_Soulmate
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ... wow ... please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please add more chapters, I couldn\'t stop reading till the end and I really want to see how it ends. More threesomes with Mike would be nice, but if that\'s not in the works, that\'s ok too, just keep writing. oh did I say please?
person LauReN
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::jumps:: HE LOVES HER! HE LOVES HER! HE LOVES HER!!!!!!!! ::jumps again:: I can\'t to read the next chapter about the partee. Yayee partee\'s!!

~LauReN