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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow
person l\'etje
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please let jason save her and let them tell each other that tha love eachother. keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome chapter! I want that sick fuck Richard in fucking jail. How dare he do that to little Savvy. God. Fucking asshole. Cliiifffffhanngeerss areee eviillll!!! Update when you get a chance please!
person Anomlov
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please let Mrs. Haisley or Jason (or even both) COME TO Savanah\'s rescue! And if you can please wirte one chapter in November. Even if its just enough to let your readers know that Savvy\'s okay! PLEASE I can\'t take the suspense!! Write More!
person Yumi
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!! You updated =]
person the_true_Silver
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t believe jason left her alone..... but savanah did walk off... richard is such a bastard... he should rot in hell..when u were writing this
i actaully felt savannah\'s fear... the words you used convey the situation perfectly... please updat as soon as possible!!

Silver
person LauReN
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I wish I could fully imagine what costume sounds like, though it sounds really pretty. And he can\'t stop it. He knows he loves her. And she\'s getting the hint too. MUAHAHAHAHA! Sorry. Got carried away.

~LauReN
person slider
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapi! are you going to write more about the party?
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s great. Can\'t wait to see how you finish it.
person Kat
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I have found your story to be a wonderful work. I am extreamly eager for you to finish is wonderful story. I can\'t wait to read what happens next.

Keep up the good work.