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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person *bloodykisses*
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far and it seems that he\'s not exactly as immune to her as she thinks. Can\'t wait for the action to begin. I\'m sure it\'ll be hot. Keep up with the great work.
person Phoenixangel7
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it! Please keep writing! Don\'t leave me in suspense, I need to know what happens because Jason sounds like a certified hottie!
person angel
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! this has great potential, i wanna know what happens!
person lilred_07
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start i can\'t wait till you put up your next chapter
person awesome
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
delighted. lol u gonna add another chapter soon right? i hope so. this is completly awesome so far. can\'t wait for more
person ehu
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty interesting story! great plot line! can\'t wait for the \"fun\" to start up.
person anon13
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The plot is amazing so far-I\'m anxious to see what-or who- will come next.