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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more! Ah! This story is amazing, it\'s cute and adorable, yet lusty and violent at the same time. How do you write so well?
Well, I hope you write another chapter, because that would make me so happy, but that\'s not why I\'m reviewing. I\'m reviewing to let you know you rock. ^_^
Rock on <3
Well, I hope you write another chapter, because that would make me so happy, but that\'s not why I\'m reviewing. I\'m reviewing to let you know you rock. ^_^
Rock on <3
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice I like it!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very promising start- I love it!! Please hurry and continue!!!!!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!1
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!1
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for the 1st time wring in a guy\'s POV, but I don\'t know if we would use words like \"deflowering\" when we\'re about to. . .well, fuck a gal.
Maybe in the olden days they did. Anyway, story\'s great so far & has lots of potential.
Maybe in the olden days they did. Anyway, story\'s great so far & has lots of potential.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist that she didn\'t give in so easily and i liked that it was from his point of view. He seems like a REAL player...should be interesting to see where this goes! :)
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Keep it up! This looks like it\'s gonna be a good one.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it, love it, now update! lol.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quite intriguied i must say. love the characters so far, cant wait to see what jason\'s pov is going to be. update soon please!