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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok Ok Ok reviewing here.....gotta have more.....need another fix please!
heather
person Nichole
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Its going at a slow, nice pace. I\'d like to see it updated again - its a wonderful story. :)
person unknown
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update. like story.
person elizabeth
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this. it\'s hot... but is he a jerk or does he really care about her? it seems like he just wants to fuck her and i think that\'d be sad for her if that\'s all he wanted. but what the fuck do i know... i\'m a hopeless romantic with a bdsm streak. :D
person demosthenes
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice, i love it, but id really wish she would stop being a dumb ass, wake up and smell the pheramones, and realise that he obviously does want her...stupid girl. please continue i crave more
person redhead
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl this is good. keep it up. I can\'t wait for more.
person tins
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil cliffie there... definitely update asap! im loving this!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLZ I LOVE JASON!!!1!
person Katia
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written!