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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on already!! Let\'s get more nasty!
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Shakes fist: You better update again! Seriously, this story is hot and don\'t let anyone tell you different. Can\'t wait to read more.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok cuz really i never review people your my first and i\'ll tell ya why.... i want fucking more!!! haha but seriously your goddamn good! well written and extremely tantalizing topic to say the least! good character development as well but one might want to elaborate on why Savannah has such an issue with him touching her neck as well as giving into him, might make it a little more complex if ya want, but fuck me i\'m quite content with the way it is now!! can\'t wait until he fucks her bloody brains out and hopefully she might come into her own and dominate him for a while....? hahah anyways please update soon! kisses
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update! love the story
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.. you gave it a plot and you gave the characters feelings without taking away from the lusty parts. Please.. write more. I love it!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'d better update. *waves chocolate around* do you like chocolate? Please, please update.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! i luv this story! really! please continue updating! please?! would be very much appreciated thanks =). i luv the way jason treats savannah, like nice, but also, like the way she wants him, and yeah hopefuly savannah lets him more, luv the plot =))))))))!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice but I do wonder how things will go from here, and when she\'ll start to give in.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love it! Please don\'t give up and keep on writing!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh lala! this is a great story, i can\'t wait for you to update=)