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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!! The story is so good, I just wana do a little happy dance! Fabulous description, by the way.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, and you really should keep going with it. I do have a suggestion. Jason goes from being a nice guy to being a jerk and back several times. It doens\'t really fit that he is so caring about savvy in one part, then just wanting to have sex in the next.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! One of the best fics i\'ve read! I love the way you\'re building it up. Keep writing.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fan-fucking-tastic. Next chapter PLS
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gimmie more ....
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh, i like jason..so..
>< Please update!!!!!
>< Please update!!!!!
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you update you, tis good, want to know more
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well in that case, i think id better review! this fic is so good, i only wish there was more!!! n i think savannah should stop being so...frigid? no thats not rite, coz she wants it 2 happen reli...i just dont think she should be so uptight about it n she should just relax...other than that, great story, can\'t wait for more!!!
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pout* but you have to update i like your story. If your dont ill seek tentacle monsters on you...
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im already hooked on this story! i can\'t wait to see what happens next