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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t detract from the original story!! Please continue writing about jason\'s seduction of savannah..
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I love it.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! great plot. about breaking a tough gal. do update more often! cant wait until they reach the cabin aand the sex parties. =)
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Update soon!!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good...I really like it. I think that sevannah is too unsure of herself to be convincing, though. I\'ll look forward to reading more of this later :)
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for more. Great stuff.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i really, realy, love your story and I\'d be heart broken if you don\'t update it.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so frustrating that you haven\'t yet updated! I\'d love to read the next chapter. (Could you e-mail me when you update, please?)
The character portrayal is quite well done.
Hard to see how you\'ll make it work out though - they\'re pretty different. Actually, Jason\'s thoughts shocked me.... But that\'s not a bad thing. :)
I think you\'re very good at writing this.. and I enjoy reading it. :)
The character portrayal is quite well done.
Hard to see how you\'ll make it work out though - they\'re pretty different. Actually, Jason\'s thoughts shocked me.... But that\'s not a bad thing. :)
I think you\'re very good at writing this.. and I enjoy reading it. :)
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story keep updating and i will try and review as much as i can.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! You need to keep writting. You can\'t leave me hanging like that!