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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person tina
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no no its good
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story! It\'s so well written and thought out. Thank you for sharing it!
person cu-kid
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most of the time I don\'t review when authors say that they will only update if I do...but I\'ll make an exception for you ^_^ You\'ve got a really good story going here! It\'s very well written and flows nicely. So, here\'s my review -for what it\'s worth- and I hope that you will update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice!! more jason--> savannah action! thanks for updating so frequently! =)
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH *shakes you* Keep writing, I want to see this story updated again!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story! You totally have to update!
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
much better than most of the stuff on this site, very nicely done.
person lizzy
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, I just wanted you to know that, this story is really REALLY GOOOOOOOOD!! Please continue!!! i can\'t wait until you do the next chapter!!!
person Eniya
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAhahahahhah that was some good shit!!! fucking hilarious! i love it!! fabulous job, kinda sad that he still doesn\'t really seem to care for her but then again i am a hopeless romantic so yeah awesome job and please write more!! haha you rock!
person Nem
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor girl! how embarrassing. Jason is kind of mean - or at least stupid :) They need to get some serious talking done... I\'m afraid to think about how Savannah will feel at the end of their weekend.

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