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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Anon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tiktok,tiktok , lol --been a long time so more soon? very good
person Geki
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update, this best non-oneshot in this section I\'ve read so far.
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hott. major. that last chapter was hot_t. everything about it is. i\'m loving that it seems to be a bit of a master/pet situation with savy as the pet and jase as the master. more soon i hope
person yami990
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. this is really good.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still as good as ever keep it up and as hot as ever ;)
person Liz
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue! it\'s really good!
person me
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, I would so have beat the living crap out of Jason for that one. This boy is kerazy! I mean, seriously, getting tongue fucked by a girl she doesn\'t know in a store in front of people?! Wow, but great, keep going, I love it!
person cukid9
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good! I didn\'t think Savannah had it in her! Teasing Jason like that...lol. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Anomlov
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait 4 the next chapt. Hope things heat up even more!
person angel
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was...interesting...v ooc 4 the whole story, kinda started a down a whole new plot-line there...didn\'t really link up...it was good, but maybe a chapter in-between would have carried it along a bit better. otherwise, update soon, i can\'t wait till they get to the house n the kinky fun starts lol!!!
xxx angel xxx