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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person anomlov
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chappie. Hope the next one is the lemon! (Fingers are crossed saying \'Please let next chapter be a lemon\') ;)
person Ginger*
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ur story\'s really good! Keep it up, can\'t wait to read the next part
person BZLF
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good work so far.
I wonder how long before they finally Screw tho.
person cukid9
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo that was a good ending to that chapter! I can\'t wait to see what comes next...and don\'t stress too much when you write from Jason\'s POV...I think you\'re doing a great job!
person josette
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I like the way you are building up to plot. I wonder if Savvy was molested or raped. This would explain her fear. I\'ll be anxiously awaiting the next update.
person Kaolla-nyrrat
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg your stories are so good! This is the first time I\'ve read them and I love them!
Does Savvy have an STI or something?
person crayfish60607
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Youre just gonna leave off there? Why can\'t she have kids? Why? *shakes you* Tell us!
person Cutser
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Absolutely one of the best stories I\'ve read here (on aff) so far, and i\'ve read a lot. I really like your characters and how they react to things. It makes the story so much more... fun to read. Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey continue!!
person vhaly
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UP DATE 7TH CHAPTER NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11