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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Riley
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Can\'t wait until the next update!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gosh this is great!!!
person Nikku
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry you were sick. It doesn\'t matter to me how long it akes for you to update, just not as long as a year. I can\'t wait a year for an update. Neway\'s I hope you\'re feeling better.

This chapter was great. I enjoyed reading it. You did a wonderful job and I\'m glad jason was feeling sorry about the fact that she couldn\'t have children. Keep up the great work and update whenever you can.
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo...that was a good chapter...well worth the little wait we had. Thank you!
person Anomlov
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! That was an awsome chappie, I LOVED it. I can\'t wait to see what Jason does to Savvy now that she has said \'I love you\'. Again awsome, worth the wait!
person Toxicdreams
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm..i really like this..cant wait till next chap.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
get the next chapter out plz
person Set
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more!! This story has plot, it\'s written well, and you can spell!

All of what I just said is hard to find here in the erotica section. This is the first story that I\'ve read non-stop and been satisfied with. Please update asap!!!

Love the story, you\'re so great!

Set-chan
person Rion
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Keep it up! I really feel sorry for her!
person Nikku
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes I would just love to hit males who ask stupid questions over the head. You aren\'t supposed to ask someone why they can\'t have kids. Jeez, that\'s wicked personal. Sorry, not trying to be mean to you or anything. Anyway, you\'re doing a great job, so please keep up the great work and update soon.