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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Kateko
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, one thing added to my last review? Any chance we can get some real dom/sub, slave-type stuff? Heh, that\'s hot :P
person blah
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seems like someones going to get an ass-kicking....
person Meg
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is AWESOME, i cant wait for the next chapter!
person Eniya
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work!! i love that jason is falling for her!!! hella cute please write more!! ;)
person Eniya
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey just a little thought wouldn\'t it be fun if the foursome got all hot and heavy, and Mrs. Haisly \"strongly\" suggested that savannah took the lead and dominated jason for a while might be fun to have him react to that seeing as he seens to have somewhat of an issue with control or even better yet let her get her freak on with jack doing what she pleased to the little boy..... could be fun anyway love the story and great writing!! please update soon!!! *pouts* ;)
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hum, woulda wanted more action, but there was some so thanks =), specially the savvyjason action, and then yay for eventually showing signs jason liked savvy, with the jealousness =D, savvy was getting a little annoying at the beginning, thanks for updating! =) keep up the good work!
person anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!! :D fast plz...this story\'s amazing
person Anomlov
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good one! I hope you keep writing!! I\'ll keep watching for your next chapt. Please let it be \'party\' and Jason stops Savvy from going around with any other guys!! Well whatever it is, please let it be soon!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon plz i can\'t wait to see what is going to happen!
person all iwant is an update
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LIke The name suggests I only want another update to keep me happy. Great Story.