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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person Anon
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is good! Im not finished with all the chapters yet but it\'s very twisty!
person the_True_silver
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good description of jason and savvy.... i like how jason is jealous

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person Anon
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, wow...... You need to update this ASAP! This is an amazing story, I really got lost in it. Please continue, and please do it soon!
person silver_bow
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN! THe suspense is killing me. But that was one of my favorite chapters, trust me. Very emotional, in Jason\'s standards. Is he starting to get jealous, hmmm? I hope so. I like how you\'re making *him* jealous... This one was really hot. Hopefully, you\'ll be updating again. SOON! Preferably NOW, actually. *takes out a whip* I shall slave drive you into updating... But naaaah. Can\'t force a writer. More chapters!
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dramatic gasp!* Lol, that was an awesome ending to that chapter, I\'m dieing to find out what happens next. Hope to hear more from you soon.
person P
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=) nice, making jason jealous! but rr, no like other action, want jason savvy, boo on jason not being jealous, or is he?! =p
person Jason
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Toxicdreams
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovin the new chapters..your doing a good job!
person motre
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
havn\'t updated in awhile. hope u do soon
person Kateko
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, write more, write more! ^_^ This is excellent, quite possibly the best plot on the site.

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