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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls update as fast as you can.. if its okay? hehe I read all your chapters today... wonderful! I just can\'t stop reading... hope you\'ll update soon.. can\'t wait for the next chapter.. ^_^
Keep up the good work! ^^
Keep up the good work! ^^
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i kinda want her to get pissed about that one... rick was nasty. LOVE the story though! cant wait for the next one
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the complex relationship that you have written between Jason and Savannah in each chapter. The sex is always hot, although in this newest chapter, I didn\'t like Jason just letting those two guys (especially the gross one) fuck Savannah in that manner. Jason is a jerk, but he also loves her, so I found his not doing anything to stop those two guys from having their way with her and then participating in it very uncool. I hope that Savannah grows more assertive and doesn\'t always submit to Jason\'s wishes in the chapters to come. Write more soon! :)
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was great! ^_^
The last chapter was really good too. I meant to review after I had read it (last week sometime), but my internet connection was being all crazy *sigh* Anyways, wow. This is probably my favorite erotica on here. I don\'t have many -I think I\'m too picky...but there\'s something about this one. I like the way that Savannah is constantly acting like a girl \"should\" but is really totally kinky. And I love the inner turmoil of Jason...he\'s got it soooo bad for her ^_^ The Haisley\'s are a little...odd...but I think it\'s a great element of the story.
I look forward to your next update -whenever you have the time ^_~
The last chapter was really good too. I meant to review after I had read it (last week sometime), but my internet connection was being all crazy *sigh* Anyways, wow. This is probably my favorite erotica on here. I don\'t have many -I think I\'m too picky...but there\'s something about this one. I like the way that Savannah is constantly acting like a girl \"should\" but is really totally kinky. And I love the inner turmoil of Jason...he\'s got it soooo bad for her ^_^ The Haisley\'s are a little...odd...but I think it\'s a great element of the story.
I look forward to your next update -whenever you have the time ^_~
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t say I\'m a big fan of gang rape.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great!!! I am surprised Jason would let them do that to her after watching Jack and Savvy go at it earlier! But I guess he wanted to punish her in a way.
I hope he eventually decides he loves her! :)
But until then, lots of sex would be good! I did dig that scene with Jack but Rich turned me off a little!
I hope he eventually decides he loves her! :)
But until then, lots of sex would be good! I did dig that scene with Jack but Rich turned me off a little!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was good, yet i feel really bad for her
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mou~ I love this story, how\'s Savvy gonna make him jealous? I want to know! =P
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is...wow...so good...great story :) please let me know when you add more :)
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! A Story with at least a little plot! I\'m pleased, I\'m missing such stories. Please go on really really soon I\'d love to know what\'s comming up next!
I like \'your\' Jason\'s POV a lot, but do you really think such cute guys exist in reality? I wished they would!
So please go on and let me continue dreaming that there (at least) excists this kind of guy on earth!
I like \'your\' Jason\'s POV a lot, but do you really think such cute guys exist in reality? I wished they would!
So please go on and let me continue dreaming that there (at least) excists this kind of guy on earth!