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Is Jason supposed to sound satirical? (is that the right word?) I\'m just sort of confused with his \'voice\'. one second sweet, the next satirical.

great new chapters!

OOOOH! Jason makes me mad sometimes! Does he love Savvy? I like this story alot, and it bugs me that I don\'t know if he really does love her. I\'m waiting for the next chapter. Maybe I\'ll fnd out.

~LauReN

Wow, you just keep getting better don\'t you? Can\'t wait for more hoping that you have a chapter with just jason and savy soon but I can wait. Keep it up.

wow. ok wow I stumbled into this site and found your story and wow this was awesome most of the storys just don\'t have a real feel for the charachters and its all sex which isn\'t bad but the truly great stories get you connected and make it all the more real. that is what makes a great author great and real charachters and well I should know I pick the stories that go into magazines and this has professional written all over it. ok and the story is grat props are realistc the thermometer was genius, and the inner turmoil of the two was fantastic. have fun and update often.

Gah, write more that was such a horrible way to leave me hanging. When I read your story I don\'t even realize that I reach the bottom of the webpage and when your chapter ends I\'m just like \'...;_; nu...\'

I like this new chapter, although I think poor Savvy got it a little harsh there. =P

poor jason.. he should show more affection... and angst some more... and savvy should be less of a slut to rich

Silver

Awesome as always....but we\'re still looking for just Savannah and Jason alone with D/s. :D Lol, still completely awesome though, keep it up!

This is really good. I hope you update more. I\'m looking forward to it.