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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! The fantasy part was awesome, and then he comes to with Mike...lol. That was great. It seems that Mike and Savvy have ganged up on poor Jason...good ^_^ I like Jason, don\'t get me wrong -he\'s incredibly sexy- but he needs to be taught a lesson for using Savvy like he has been.
Loved it! Can\'t wait for the next, as always ^_^
Loved it! Can\'t wait for the next, as always ^_^
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE BASTARD! I don\'t like Jason anymore. ::growls:: That bastard. Mike\'s cool. Is he gay? I wonder what will happen between Jason and Savannah though. . .
~LauReN
~LauReN
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is very good story and i hope that jason falls in love with her and maybey if everything is claered she,jason and mike could do a treesome. keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was soo sad! PLEASE make a happy chapter next time! Let Mike make Savvy feel better!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. That was the best chapter so far, and amazingly without sex! You are an incredible story teller. So so so glad to see Savannah doing some soul searching about all this, as I\'d been a bit disturbed about how easily both she and Jason had allowed the threesome, and then even worse... the foursome.
Bravo. I applaud you and thank you. Wonderful chapter, wonderful story.
Bravo. I applaud you and thank you. Wonderful chapter, wonderful story.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good, a little short but well worth the wait! hurry on up with the next chapterrrr!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Intense chapter! Aw, now I feel really bad for Savannah and hate Jason...well, I don\'t really hate him, because I, personally, think he\'s lying through his teeth when he says it\'s just casual...I think he has a thing for her. But, I suppose, that\'s for you to tell me ^_^
Great work, can\'t wait for the next chapter!
Great work, can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has been delightfully erotic, thoughtfully planned, or just nauseating at times. I love the amount of control you have over my emotions with this story...this turn is very interesting, and your next update will be eagerly awaited.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story so much!! Jason is hot, even if he is a little sick. Or maybe the right word is broken.
I think in spite of his protests- he truly does love her and he is going to have to lose her in order to realize that.
It\'s good that Mike has arrived now and he can shed some reality into the situation.
The threesomes and foursomes were hot- but I think she needs to really want them and not just to make Jason jealous. although some good old fashioned jealousy might give him the kick in the pants he deserves!!!
I think in spite of his protests- he truly does love her and he is going to have to lose her in order to realize that.
It\'s good that Mike has arrived now and he can shed some reality into the situation.
The threesomes and foursomes were hot- but I think she needs to really want them and not just to make Jason jealous. although some good old fashioned jealousy might give him the kick in the pants he deserves!!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! Very emotional and definitely worth the wait. I feel really bad for Savannah. Jason\'s a jerk, but hopefully he\'ll come to his senses. I\'m intrigued by this new dynamic that you\'ve introduced with Mike and can\'t wait to read more. Great job!