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for Vacation: All He Ever Wanted

by clippedwings

person j
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could u please do a fic on the princess Carmen story
person Pinksicle
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man, I was hoping she'd end up with Mike. I really can't stand Jason. He reminds me of this bastard who used to date my friend.
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. What a sweet ending to such a sick story...
person LauReN
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was one of best original stories I've read. VERY VERY GOOD. And since you reposted the last bit, the "I love you" bit, it really ended it nicely.

Sure, I wouldn't mind reading abour Lord Ralston and Princess Carmen.
person sharllissa
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i am sorry to see this story end as i enjoyed it quit alot. i would continue to read more if there was more. Yes i would be interested in reading a lord and princess story. keep on writing.
person sexymama1967
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the repost - I read it the first time too but I have to say the addition of the "I love you, Savvy." Was perfect!!
It took Jason a lot to get to that point and he is now a man not letting this girl get away again!!
At least that is what I believe! ;)
Great job!!!
person Yumi
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to know the story of Lord Ralston and Carmen!! =D
person kitkat
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sure, why not write the story that she took her fantacy from. It could be a great story now that you know how it ends.

Best of luck!
person Slinki
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just a bity info here, I am actually an author but the site deleated my work and won't let me log in... But yes I defenitely would like to read the Carmen/Ralston story, it sounded good in this story, even when I didn't know the whole thing. So go ahead and write it, I'll be waiting eagerly!
person Slinki
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Didn't you have 20 chapters up before? I checked again and there were only 19. What happened?