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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
On a scale of 1 to 10 I give this story a 9.5. I Really like it. Hope you keep updating it. VEry nice. It will be interesting to continue see how this relationship develops. Whether or not Kyla really comes to terms with her brother fucking her. Whether she will actually come to admit she enjoys it or stop all together.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, more, more, more. Please. Out of all the brothers, the Grant and Kayla hookup is my favorite. This story is awesomely hot and spicy.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is so wrong but how can i deny such a well written story. LOL. I loved the feeling and passion you put into your words. Very well written. A story like this should be getting more reviews. Keep the chapters coming!!! unpdate soon...
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-falls over laughing- ^-^ hehe that was hot and sexy and funny at the end! Knee slapping good time whoo god I love you
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE! VERY NICE!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like both of these stories you\'re doing. Even if they are very taboo. Are you going to finish the other one? I hope so.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuckin awesome! though you should continue with both!... i want to read more about the other brothers, kyla is enjoying it...ure going good.
keep on writing
*thumbs up*
keep on writing
*thumbs up*
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fanning blushing face* damn! hot damn! that was pretty awesome. please continue writing!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dear fuckin lords that was amazing i like both versions update soon
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I think it\'s better this way--update soon then! ^__^