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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked both My Sister's Innocence stories. Very well done. The incest part did not disgust me at all it was actually written well. I hope to read more about Tristan and Kayla, maybe you can add the part she is adopted in the sequal to that one and a twist Tristan knows she is not really his sister but mother dearest still does not like it. :)
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. the ending totally took me off.
i loved it! the story makes perfect sense now :DD
i loved it! the story makes perfect sense now :DD
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved both stories. To make things even I think you should have her end up with the twins.
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the end! dang! so true, sleeping with someone you've been raised with is a lil better than incest. but it's still seems not right. i was surprised tho, to say the least, went in a total opposite direction than i thought. congrats on another awesome story completed Solly.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greatly written and a great story, keep it up!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
here's looking to more of this story... i wait with bated breath!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was hot. you're a really good sex writer, and this story is awesome. i don't really read incest, but i'll make an exception for this story.
one question. was grant a virgin before he first slept with kayla? i got the impression that he wasn't, but if he was then that would explain why marie thought so.
and one more thing. the 'trouble' is marie hearing them going at it, right? and she will tell everyone? i don't think you should have everybody find out. maybe cos i'm a bit queasy with the whole brother/sister thing in the first place, but i would prefer it if it didn't become public. ofcourse, this is your story, and you take it the way you want to, but i think it would be better if this whole thing was kept secret. makes it more dangerous and exciting, ya know?
perhaps readers would prefer if grant and kayla's relationship developed further, yet was kept secret?
anyhoo, keep writing. i'll carry on reading, regerdless of how you take the story from here, cos i'm sure it'll be brilliant.
one question. was grant a virgin before he first slept with kayla? i got the impression that he wasn't, but if he was then that would explain why marie thought so.
and one more thing. the 'trouble' is marie hearing them going at it, right? and she will tell everyone? i don't think you should have everybody find out. maybe cos i'm a bit queasy with the whole brother/sister thing in the first place, but i would prefer it if it didn't become public. ofcourse, this is your story, and you take it the way you want to, but i think it would be better if this whole thing was kept secret. makes it more dangerous and exciting, ya know?
perhaps readers would prefer if grant and kayla's relationship developed further, yet was kept secret?
anyhoo, keep writing. i'll carry on reading, regerdless of how you take the story from here, cos i'm sure it'll be brilliant.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAY UPDATE!! :]
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moreee!! >]
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn they do make an awesome couple. i so love your writing, its amazing...great great work. god if only every girl had a brother like that hehehe cant wait to read more