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i choose Grant because he was the hottest out of all of them. Me and my sick mind can\'t get over that one. So I would pick Grant. -slaps down ten bucks on a table- I\'ll give you ten dollars!

Wow.... I am enjoying this. It has so much potential from what it has already shown. Why does she have to choose. Let her now take the power that they do not know they have given her. She started in the car. now she can completely control the whole situation.......

Very good. But as the person above noted, she\'s not weak any longer. I\'d be nice to see her develop some dominance. Oh, and let\'s not forget the mother. True this could all happen under ideal situations. But the mother would be bound to catch on sooner or later. I\'m not saying to add her into sex scenes. Good god, no. But she needs to play a bigger role and that would cut down on some of the control issues these boys have. Haha, then again, you could just forget everything I wrote. You\'re a great author, and, of course, I\'ll look forward to the next chapter.

incredible. more please! and update the other My Sister\'s Innocence while you\'re at it. thanks!

hehe....that was an amaxing chapter (gang-bang) hehe damn that was hot!

More please. Of both versions.

Damn that was kinky..... That had me cuming over and over again.........wow......I do hope you update this.... its really good!!!!

I\'m still panting~!!! Try one where they are all in on it.... and with dual penatration...(anal and pussy) that would be incredable.....wow keep this one going!

Okay that one was hot... because of the twins... Go them... and in a car! Yeah!

still lovin it. keep at it.