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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story freakin\' rocked!! I love the ending... \"Oh no, what\'s mom going to do to them?\" lol. You write very well. w00t
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to post the end to this story, its bloody awesome.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You did it! You gave it an air of reality. This deserves a few bottles of champagne. Thanks for listening to my commentary, deranged as it was. I\'m glad I could help, I just can\'t wait to see what\'s next. You don\'t mind if I kiss you, right?
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please not mother loving in this story. I like it so far, please do continue!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE do NOT make their mother join in on the activities... i HATE when that happens and it\'s just SO damn predictable. in real life, their mother would probably never do that, so please please please make her as realistic as possible. thanks!
GREAT CLIFFHANGER BY THE WAY!
GREAT CLIFFHANGER BY THE WAY!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. And what about the other version?
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And do not have the mother join in. I hate those stories.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last part ruined it! That was hot! Stupid mum... I\'m starting to hate that dense woman!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did good! Really in depth. Keep it good. AH~øHell has yet to amount to my furyø~
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Any normal other story I\'d figure the mother would be furious, but being an incest story, I know mom will probably join in. I hope. Great chapter.