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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry bout the hackers that does suck, but hell you have a good story still, thx for putting it up for us
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF!?! who the hell is hacking and where do they live! instead of deleting the story delete the chapters and write from where you orinally left off. just a suggestion. this story, in my opinion, is too good to just give up on. anybody that cant wait on a good story is a dumbass because this is a good story.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG WAT A FUKIN LOSERRR
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! It was so friggen amazing! I can\'t wait to read more. Please make more!...please :(
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooohhhhhhhhh.........they\'re in trouble....will she tell mom the boys raped her to help save her own ass or will she go through the punishment with Trystan? please update!!!! its a very good story and i hate cliffs.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I don\'t care what ya do with the mom I just want u to update it
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are they going to be like seperated or something? I mean seriously, getting caught fucking your sister by your mum is bad!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it seems like some one hacked into the story even the author name is differnt in chapper 6
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was little hard to get through, something with the way you wrote. But each chapter got better and better. You really improved :D
The last chapter... Dear god it was great
The last chapter... Dear god it was great
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!Is it totally wrong to say i thought this lil story was fukin awesome!?!lol!!I feel dirttyyy,you should write more and continue with this!