rate_review Reviews

Wow! I\'m incredibly impressed with this story! You\'re a fantastic writer and you should have the worlds biggest ego because... my god you\'re so good you\'d need one @_. only you could have a big ego that actually was true to it\'s word. xP

Anyways, this is a WONDERFUL story. OH my god. How dare you leave it with such a horrible cliff hanger! I really do hate Kago. During the first few chapters I liked him and I felt bad for Yuki... but God... that\'s just sick what he did. Poor Yuki! D: Update soon! It\'s really great (:

*squee*!! fuji is moving out! kyoei has a crush on shai! shinwa likes yuki! woohoo! i\'m happy! of course if things change...well...that\'s just for the best of the story. but for now i\'m liking it! *grins*

“Not today, Shinwa,” Yuki said, hurrying along the sidewalk. Shinwa was surprised to see a little skip in her step as she ran down the streets. She turned back towards him, a smile on her face as she did. “Shinwa, if it turns out to be true, about my sister and Kago, will you be my Valentine?”

“Yuki, Valentine’s day is over a month away,” Shinwa called with a laughter that was pleasant.

“I know!” Yuki called back, stepping further and further away. “But it will take me a couple of weeks to get up the nerve to break up with my current boyfriend.”

Shinwa smiled as Yuki slowed down, waiting for his answer. “I would love to be your Valentine,” he called, causing a few awkward stares from on the streets at the two smiling goofs in high school.
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I loved that part it just made me want to smile mucho grade times. I just can\'t get over the fact that Fuji and Shai are sisters. Awman this story is getting so good please continue to write more.

Mostly. Now to figure out what he meant about Kaori.

I so didn\'t get that part of the story. And I was suprised by the sudden actions and force that Yuki took on. She is indeed a strong girl hopfully we\'ll get to see a fight between Kago and Shinwa no doubt that Shinwa would win.

i\'m actually secretly happy that kaori is being sent away...she\'s just really twisted...but she\'s still lovable...in a twisted dark way anyhoo. there\'s just something deeply wrong with her. although i can see her side and say that you \"can\'t choose who you love...or love doing\" *shrugs* anyhoo, great chapter and really great plot!

this story is turning out better and better! i\'m just speechless. lets keep this simple though. i love this story, it makes me sit on the edge of my seat. i can\'t wait for the next chapter. thank you for writing this story!

This confirmed her suspicions about Kago in a way that she had not expected.
He was not one of the men that had taken advantage of Kaori; he was the one taping it all.
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bum bum buuuuuummmmm...

WOW.

hmm a little on the cheesy side

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I read it non stop, I coldn\'t leave the computer... ^_^ Please write more? Please?

and i was pushing for Yuki n Shinwa so much that when the cute
lil thing actually played out, i was like \"i knew that was gonna happen\" LOL

-Shinwa: “I just saw him going into a hotel with a bunch of guys.
Your sister, however, followed with Makenke later.”

call me stupid but i\'m confused bout that line! explain please!

if i\'m not mistaken, what is this about Kaori n Kago? juicy juicy, i love the twists in the story. XD
what will Yuki do next? GAWD!


i was waitin all day for an update[s]. THNX!