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by SolaceFaerie

person CrazzyGirl99
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fight was good, and I love that Kyoei(spelling?) are going to get together. Where is Amatsu, he hasn\'t been in the strory for a long time. Also, were is Danko, can we say M.I.A. Sill would like to have a few more characters, just side characters, no real story around them, a transfer student would be nice to see expecily if they got between one of the couples that is forming or formed. just waiting arounf for you to post the new chapter, can\'t wait.


P.S

I love that you can keep the story new, even thought you have 40+ chapters, keep up the fantastic writting.
person Brit
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story.....
person Tiera
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waited up for the next chapter last night. good fight XD. BOO @ Kago for pulling out a blade.

and i swear Yuki and Kyoei are the comical relief in this story.

they seem to always have something funny to say (or in Yuki\'s case, do)

WOOHOO i love this story!
person Puppy Blu
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! Sanctuary! I love you ^^ I\'m glad no one died @_. after reading this story I wouldn\'t have been nearly as surprised. (This story reminds me of that movie... Elmers Fire or something...lol Idon\'t know)
person CrazzyGirl99
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You answered my question before I even asked it. it ws going to be abouth who was Kyoie was going ot get w/. I think it\'s cute that he likes a pregnant girl. Danko is a bitch that hold a very big grudge. Why doesn\'t anyone try to do anything to Kago? I just saying that someone could have got him in his sleep. Hey, has Mr. Tennison and his fiance(Fuji\'s mom) got married yet. When is Yuki going to get w/ Shiniwa I mean slepping together. Any new characters comming soon, not beging for some b/c I have to sit and remember who is who. Whould love to see more of Shiniwa\'s gay friend and again if you could through in some type of orgy. I thought that form a little bit kyoie was trying to hit on Fuji, but that changed since Amatsu and Fuji are going to grt maried.

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I was waitting all day on Sat. for a new chapter, and today I get like 5 new chapters, so I\'m just sittibg around waiting for you to post the new chapters.
person Tiera
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! Kago no! update!
person sam
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! fight fight fight!!! hehehehe i can\'t wait for more! and sorry for not reviewing but ive been a bit busy with exams but you\'re doing good!
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!! I LOVE THE SURPRISE PAIRINGS!!!! YESSS!!!!
person Angel
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next update!!! I was wondering who Kyoei was going to get with too! ha.
person Ara Kusabana
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! AHHHH! CLIFFHANGERRRRRRR! T.T WRITE! QUICKLY! NOW NOW NOW! I\'m so enjoying this story! Very well written. Right amount of smut. Beautiful and decorative plot line. Lots of twists and turns. I\'m loving you! LOL