rate_review Reviews

Gah. Goddamn assholes. Illiterate, stupid, goddamn assholes! I love your story, how could they try and steal it!? Hell isnt\' good enough for them. T-T

At any rate, YES! New chapters I woul dhave never known were there if it weren\'t for the reviews @_. (I say at any rate too much.)

Selling the book? FUN! ^^ But you should finish it so the poor freaks out there (-cough-...me...) can still finish it? T_T

Oh, and, OH MY GOD! BAD DANKO BAD! -hits her- @_.

I hope you do seel it and maybe it can be some kind of drama. With out the sex scene of course. Don\'t worry I\'m here for you 100% of the way.

Wow.....I liked it and Glad I got to see the first of the story before you took some of it down ^_^ Hope you finish this because this is the best damn story I\'ve read in a long time.....Hope that you find something good for Shai. (Like her the best) I hope the people that stole some of the story get what\'s comeing to them

Your story continues to be great although I got a little confuzed when you took off some of the earlier chapters but I understand your reasons. I hate people who steal the work of others.

aww...its sad little people that try to steal other people\'s work that make the rest of us suffer. i\'ll be sad to see those first chapters go, but you have to do what you have to do to protect your work in any way you see fit. anyhoo, i\'m glad that you\'re continueing the story and i\'m REALLY happy that fuji forgave shinwa for his past. and i\'m even more surprised that it took mr. tennison to do it! lol oh wells...i guess he\'s more 3-dimensional that i wanted him to be. can\'t wait for more chapters!

did i not tell you you should publish such awesome work, did i not?
\'cause i believe i did. lol

book and/or movie script, this fic would sell, damnit. and i\'m buyin\'.

i\'m happy for you, Solly, your talent should be shared with the rest of the world
(that are not in tune with the glorious internet :))

YAY! Fuji forgave Shinwa! Danko (one of my preferred characters) got what she deserved, didn’t see Fuji’s fist coming tho. ^_^ that wench, spreading rumors like that (love to hate her)…. I needa shut up now and wait for an update.

KUDOS.

hmmm i think its cool if you want to take down the beginning and its just plain wrong when people try and steal
other\'s work, but good luck with trying to sell it, the idea is very good, with excellent plots, twists and turns!
The story is coming along great, i love to read it and its always cool that you update so often! :)

While not exactly what I would\'ve initially been drawn to, I must admit that your story has me hooked. Interesting mix of characters, not to say anything of the very disturbing behaviors and tendencies that several of them exhibit: The elder Oshidori’s incestuous romance has gone from irrational and hormonally driven, to a complex relationship that threatens do destroy all involved. The fact that Kago started out as the stereotypical Japanese ‘un-required crush’ for Fuji and then having him grow into a tormented tormentor of Yuki as it were…Yuki’s own long standing crush for him and the realization that finally getting what she wanted is not necessarily good for her…then there is Shai, poor lovely Shai, who goes all wanton on Mr. Tennison after he built her up enough…and on and on.

I could continue to gush here, or simply go and write you up a “review as a story” bit on the non-fiction section, but then I would let you into my twisted little mind and we wouldn’t want that.

So in a nutshell:

1. Masterful implementation of conflict in the story.
2. Creative yet plausible character development.
3. Plentiful (don’t listen to those who whine about there not being enough) sex.
4. Dynamic character interaction that allows for the readers to both relate to them and at the same time abhor their flaws.
5. Great pacing, I can not ever recall feeling that I was reading a ‘filler’ chapter; there has always been an engaging topic or plot advancement element to everything you’ve posted.
6. Multidimentional villans, who\'s motives are tangible enough to make them much more than just \'the bad guy\', some even bear elements that play on the reader\'s compasion and understanding.

All I all I hope you get to sell the idea –ponders at what it would look like as a doujinshi comic- and that you may feel inclined to grace us with more of your work.

P.S. I was most angry and chagrined to hear that someone has attempted to steal your story, I mean seriously! Stealing something that is being freely given? WTF? Talk about idea rape!
Were you to find out who this individual was, please feel free to borrow one of the several sharp pointy objects I have at my disposal in order to extract a most gruesome payment from this individual(s); While the use of a firearm would perhaps be more convenient and …um clean? For the user, as my CQC DI said:

“There are just not enough bullets in the world for you to deal with all the idiots deserving of them. This is why you are still issued a knife.”

Well cheers and Godspeed to you, I’m off to finish reading the story.

Well, I never comment on a thing till I read all existing chapters... and since every time I reached the \'last\' chapter, there was an update, took a while... and I can sum my opinion into one \'word\'
Goodlordamazingstupendousyoudeservemoneyyouregreatthisstoryisgreatandishouldusemyspacebar!

I\'m still very much in love with Fuji and Shai, but Yuki is becoming a close favorite now that she is seeming a bit more real these days. Kago is quite scary, in a way that only makes me want to throw up a few times though, so I figure it is only natural to hate him. Even though, he does add some good plot twists.

Speaking of the plot, it has turned out wonderfully. Everything flows together perfectly, which is still something I enjoy.

Also, I might do some fanart, and I figure I\'m pretty good. Don\'t expect anything really soon though, I\'ve been in a bit of a rut for a couple of months now so the drawing process is taking far too long.