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for School Girls' Stories

by SolaceFaerie

person CrazzyGirl99
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.k. After that turn of events, and I realy love your stories, I would like for you to email me. I usual don\'t give it out to to many people. I just would realy like for you to hit me up b/c I realy would like to ask you more questions re: School Girl Stories and all of your other work.

The story is getting realy good, I\'m so unsure about was is going to happen to Amatsu and Fuji\'s relationshiop, so far I can\' tell some things. Like Shai and Kyoie getting together. And, did Amatsu realy kill Kago, and this whole time what is Nakago doin in the mad house? So many questions, I just don\'t know what to think.

I realy need to go and read some more of your strories soooooo, bye bye for now.

Crazzy Girl99

Again please try to email me if you get a chance form writting all of these great fanics.
person Amanda
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for a while and I beleive it is just excellent! I hate it when authors will write an erotic peice with nuthin but cold hard sex. (Lmao to put it bluntly). Your story has a terrific plot with tons of different scenarios, and characters that seem so real. Right now I am dying to know what happens! I have a feeling Nakago may have killed Kago.. hmm? lol Just a guess.. I don\'t want Amatsu to be proven guilty.. hes one of my faves! But newayz, great story u have here! I\'ll be sure to reveiw as much as I can and I\'m looking forward to reading other stories and series by you!

**Amanda
person ehu
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah! what a twist! i can\'t believe it! i don\'t think amatsu killed him, must have been nakago. please let it be nakago! i don\'t want fuji to wake up and see that she lost amatsu because of kago! whaaaa!!! *sniffles back tears* anyhoo...great story!
person Angel
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next one!! pleeease update soon!! this is probably worse suspense than the previous chapter!
person ehu
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*GAH!!!!* kago is a whacko! i can\'t believe that he stabbed her! well..he is obssessed...but still!!!! i hope he dies in his own feces! diediedie! *sighs* i just...darn...i had hoped that she would be okay. but i guess it isn\'t over till all the loose ends are tied. and i hope that shinwa works through his guilt and tells yuki. cause...well...c\'mon, it\'s yuki! she\'ll forgive him! especially if he explains it to her. anyhoo...loving the plot line as usual. really puts you through the wringer! completely couldn\'t see that one coming! that\'s what i love about good stories!
person CrazzyGirl99
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last few chapters have been great, I haven\'t been online in so many days , and the first thing I do is come to read your stories, and thenI find out that you\'re almost through w/ the seris. i\'m heart broken, and yet the I\'m o.k. w. it b/c the story just seems to get better and better. I thought it was a turn of events when Amatsu\'s older brother was killed b/c of Shiniwa. Also, what will it take for Kaori to not fuck w/ anyone. Everyone has changed so much, since the begging of the seris. I love how the could be a soap opera, I love that Shai finaly got togrther w/ Kyoie(sp?) Every thing is just so great that I can\'t wait to see how it\'s going to end. And I know it\'s going to end w/ a bang.

P.S.
Are you still going to write new stories, even one shots are good to see from great writters as your self. Please just write anything, since this seris is almost over.

Love always,
Dedicated read and review
CrazzyGirl99
person AngelGC112
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for an update!!!!
person SilverStrings
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wa-hoo Nagako escaped and killed Kago. *throws a celebration* I found who I thought should be Kaori although i haven\'t found the perfect picture of who she is.
person SilverStrings
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well since I can\'t draw all that well I was thinking about me choosing real people to be Yuki and the rest.
person Tiera :-*
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i gotta nagging suspicion Nakago had something to do with Kago\'s murder. (A-DUH)

i can\'t get over the fact this story lets on clues in strategically placed places where
it\'s like a light bulb going off in our heads. and several just clicked in my head!
most fics that I’ve read don\'t even have that essential asset like SGS.

nothing in the stories are there for nothing, they\'re there as plot advancements and
even the littlest things shouldn’t be glanced over. That’s why I reread some of my favorite
parts throughout the whole fic even if it’s to make sure I read it correctly or to re-jog my memory.

[PS: how dare you call me nuts! HAHA... ahhh, that\'s what i get for not having a summer job. :D]