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by SolaceFaerie

person ehu
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m so happy that i got the chance to experience this story with you, the girls and all the fans out there. it\'s been an
incredible ride! thanks so much for writing this and i hope to see more of your writing in the future!
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my new fav. story on aff! Keep up the great work.
person SilverStrings
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter so much. I\'m glad how they ended up. So beautiful ^_^ Don\'t let this be the last of them at least give us a sneak peak at what they are doing in Canada. This has to be my favorite chapter. I love those two. As for Danko I hope she rots somewere in a ditch, no scratch that I hope she rots in hell.
person SilverStrings
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O wow I never thought that this story would come to an end so quickly. Poor Fuji she better watch out at that all girls school for those lesbians. Lol That would be hilarious if one of them came on to her. I can\'t wait for the next school year Ms. Chenbaro\'s wedding, Shai\'s baby, and Yuki and Shinwa doin\' it lol. I loved this story so much I just can\'t wait for part two I wonder what\'cha gonna call it maybe Yuki, Shai, Fuji, Amatsu, Shinwa, Ms. Chenbar, and the rest story continue. j/k Maybe in the next story you can get Danko to save Yukior Shai or Fuji and have herf just walk away it be so cool and mysterious. Well that\'s all I got to say until next time.

~Silver Strings
person kagomereborn
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiya! That wa a good story and yes you do have ends to wrap up Yuki and shinwa....can\'t wait....Good job...pats back and gives chocolate dove bars*
person Gilrean
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for that new story!!!!! This one was great!!! I was always waiting for updates!! Good job!!!
person Jamie
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since you have deleted the beginning chapters, I don\'t remember what some of the characters look like. I\'m not good at drawing but I like to make dolls .... I could make dolls to look like the characters? Great story .... I love Shai and that other guy (not the teacher), Fuji\'s boyfriend\'s friend who likes Shai! ~~Jamie
person Sam
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww thats a sweet ending and im glad that Kaori said she will be as true as she could, since that definately keeps her in character. More please!!!
person Semme
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAY! I LOVE THIS STORY!
person Tiera :D
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG seems like the story ended so abruptly.

I’m ssooo excited and eager for Year 2!

I didn’t feel this fic was long, seemed like it went by so fast I didn’t notice I read so much.

Maybe Danko could get in with the terrible crowd (ain’t like she wasn’t at this school) @ her new school if you decide to continue her individual story.

Surprisingly a lot of crazy shit comes to mind about Fuji going to an all-girl’s school.

And, dare I say it, I request someone come between one of the already perfect couples like someone before me suggested. It’ll add drama!!

TREMENDOUS, FABULOUS, KICK-ASS, WONDERFUL, talented work Solly! I patiently wait for the next chronicle installment!!!

XOXO

[P.S.: what did Shinwa think of Shoushin’s death anyway? Shinwa seems to have limited emotions… let’s see some unhappiness!]

Shutting up…. :-*