rate_review Reviews

Quite impressed by this story so far, and I\'m not even usually interested in such things. Though explict details lack a bit you\'re characters are very creative and well thought out, and you are doing a great job with settings. It\'s not often I\'m able to find a story that i\'m so interested in, please write more if you find the time. Kudos to you. ^_^

THANKIES!!! Oh My Gosh! Someone likes that story!!! SO COOL! I MEAN, I THOUGHT SINCE NO ONE REVIEWED THAT STORY THEY DIDN\'T LIKE IT BECAUSE I DON\'T REVIEW STORIES I DON\'T LIKE SO NOT TO HURT OTHER PEOPLE\'S FEELINGS, AND WHEN YOU REVIEWED MINE STORY I JUST WANTED TO HUG YOU. OF COURSE, I MIGHT BE ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE PLANET FROM YOU!!! XD BUT STILL!!! YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! And, this is good, *nods* and I don\'t know why you said my story has detail, but then again... Maybe I\'m just one of those author\'s that can\'t see how good their works are... Hm... Maybe... WHAT AM I THINKING??? MY STORIES SUCK! But hell, you wouldn\'t care, anyways, love this story, and I wanna ask, WHY DIDN\'T YOU GET LIKE, 100 REVIEWS??? BECAUSE YOU SURE DESERVE IT! EVERY AUTHOR DESERVES IT!!!

That must be the most capital\'s I used in a review... ^^;

Anyways, this is good, very good, all the chapters are good, very good, fabulous, superb, wonderful, you write pretty stories... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Longest review I ever did! AND NO CUT AND PASTE! Anything connected to you makes me proud for some reason... I DID YOUR FIRST REVIEW!!! XD XD XD

Still proud because of that... Now, just like I said before, and just like Anon said, a tiny more detail would be good, but still... XD

Sincerely,
Marigold

P.S SO PROUD!!! *Sings National Anthem* I don\'t know why I did that... BUT SO PROUD!!! FOR BEING YOUR FIRST REVIEWER FOR THAT STORY I MEAN!!! XD XD XD

Keep going!! I want more ennison and shai l;ike I said before and just more of everyone!! Let\'s see some definite action for some of the others aside from Kaori

Well done once more, as for my favorite couple/character...well I can\'t say much for couple, but character wise I think Nakago is my favorite, just find the parts with him more interesting. Keep up the good work n\' all that stuff.

I love it so far- I have read all 6 chapters. But I would like more of Shai and Mr. Tennison because I am so evil and naughty. More detail would be wonderful- but I like it as is too! More please!

oooooooooooh i definately like this! i just wanted to encourage you to keep writing! ;)

Am I like, your first reviewer? Yaaa! Anyways, LOVE this, it\'s cool. Maybe you should add more detail, but all in all, I give you a five star... I\'M THE FIRST TO RATE YOU TOO! SO PROUD! XD Anyways, this is cool, like I said, and I can\'t find any flaws, like I said, more detail would be good, but what the heck, you have more detail in your work then all my work together...

Sincerely,
Marigold

P.S Oh my gosh! SO PROUD!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD