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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story. Mostly for the plot, it was nice to finally read something that had such an amazing storyline to it. Alot of the stuff I never even expected to happen and yet it seems exactly perfect for the story. You do an extremely good job at keeping with the element of suprise, which frankly, suprised me. Also, the way you write, the words just seem perfect for the story, and that\'s another reason that I managed to read the whole thing (All in one night I might add).
For characters, I have to say I\'m stuck between Fuji and Shai (I hope I spelled that right). They both are leading such interesting lives and I can\'t help but get drawn into it all. What with all the problems that keep popping up. Not that Yuki doesn\'t have her own problems, of course.
You\'ve managed to make a really thrilling story with out it being all about sex, period. So, thank you for the good read and I\'ll be eagerly awaiting your next update. And with that I say, keep up the good work!
For characters, I have to say I\'m stuck between Fuji and Shai (I hope I spelled that right). They both are leading such interesting lives and I can\'t help but get drawn into it all. What with all the problems that keep popping up. Not that Yuki doesn\'t have her own problems, of course.
You\'ve managed to make a really thrilling story with out it being all about sex, period. So, thank you for the good read and I\'ll be eagerly awaiting your next update. And with that I say, keep up the good work!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that is not fair leaving at a cliffhanger (or faller) I need to know what happens write I beg of you for me to actually have peace write !!!!! Oh and by the way it is really a good story full of ...ummmm ummmthings to keep me interested keep it up
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Realy good, I read the stories almost everyday and they just keep getting better and better. I hope that you keep up the great work, this is the longest seris that I have ever read anywhere. I read your stories more than I read anyone else, and more than I read books. I realy like them , b/c they\'re short and strait to the point w/out begging to long for a chaprter. I love your style of wrtitting, thanks so much every thing is great and I hope that you can continue to write such wonderfull stories.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are so great, I read them more than I\'v read any where else. I love how the ch. are short ,and get to the point w/ out dragging it on. This is some of the best writting that I have ever seen, it\'s so great that you took a common topic and made it one of the best seris on the site. Kepp up the fantastic work, can\'t wait to see more of yor works and also the see more in this seris.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, just wanna drop by and tell you how much i love your fic. i really hope kaori and nakago get together eventually, it\'s so sin full, yet i cant help but wanting more anyways update soon, c-ya!!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i didn\'t see that coming! the horror of it all!!! LOL poor shai!!!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. I like the story so far. I want to see what will happen with Fuji and Shai too. Please continue.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why oh why isn\'t there a higher rating than 5 Stars?
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED that chapter! Don\'t know why I like it so much. MAYBE it\'s because I got tired of seeing so many sex scenes, lol. In this chapter, everything just made sense. It was easy to understand. That\'s why I LOVED it!
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