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for School Girls' Stories

by SolaceFaerie

person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although Im not really fond of the incest thing (but how many ppl turly are?) the plots of each of the girls are really good! Especially how the secret lives (of some of the characters) mix with each other. Great work!!
person Crazzy Girl99
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again WONDERFUL!!! That was one of my questions \"What ever hapened to Nakago?\" And you answered it, now I whant to know more about the group Velvet Wrappings, what happed to the rest of the group members, and why is the singer @ the school w. the w/ girls. And when is the wedding for Mr. Tennison, and Fuji\'s mon? I think it would be great if you put an orgy in the next the few chapters. Don\'t care who it is, Danko and the gang bang rape was good I just would like to see more \"group fun\". As always keep up the good work can\'t wait to see what\'s next!!!!!!!
person Solly
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The titles are backwards and forwards, the Western way, given name first, then surname, then it\'s the opposite way showing how it would truly be in Japan, surname first then given name second. No real reasoning to it, and if you can\'t tell in the actual chapter it\'s the way it should be only. So it\'s not really backwards than forwards so much as Westernized, then Easternized.
person O_o
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! Shai! O_O *is freaking out* Kago is freaky, I\'m happy for Fuji, can relate to and feel sorry for Yuki, and don\'t want Shai to die! This is a pretty cool story. Keep writing. :)
person anime lover
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey...this is the best fanfic i\'ve read so far...lemon and non-lemon alike...the characters and the plot are so interesting...keep up the good work!!!!
person SilverStrings
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, that\'s not fair Shai and Fuji always get the guys when is it going to be Yuki\'s turn? Maybe she can have Shinwa please? She needs someone. Anyone, but Kago. I hate him. Great story by the way I\'m glad you didn\'t make it all smut.
person sam
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i can\'t believe Shai jumped!!! I REALLY wana see how things go between Yuki and Kago......MORE PLEASE!!!
person anon
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww thats SOOO sad that he lost his friend too and such a relief that shai was saved (completely unrealistic but it IS fiction) ;)
person Crazzy Girl99
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter just made me cry, w/ the death of the bass player and Shi trying to commit suicide. The ending is what made the tears come down. The irony of the story is so good, I will try to review every day, I am one of your loyal fans, please don\'t stop and I\'m liking the into of new character. Also, I want to more about Nakago in the intitute, and why is Kago so inot murder. Hey what ever happened to the guy who raped Danko. I have so many questions, and I hope you have just as many chapters to add. Cant\' wait to see next chapter.

P.S.
This is so good, I would realy like for you to keep up w/ the great work,and if you could write so more stories beside just \"School Girl Stories\". I will most definitly read all of them.
person tygertyger
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god, that is so sad. Poor Shai. And Yuki needs to kick Kago\'s ass.