rate_review Reviews

^that was me!

Sorry I haven\'t read/reviewed in a few days. Been knid of busy w/ work. Any way, I love that you put a gay person in the story. i keep wondering who is going to get w. Shiniwa I\'m stuck now b/t Yuki adn Shai. Also WOW! Turn of events w/ Shai\'s sas also being Fuji\'s dad. Are they blood sisters or is someone adopted b/c I thought from their desciptions that they looked nothing alike. I realy want to know what caused the two parents (cant\' think of names now) to divorce and for him to work for hi ex-wife. Realy gratefull that you answered my questions about Shiniwa. and also I want to know more about Kago\'s obbsesion w/ death and pain. Hey , I realy want to know about the whole family, and their \"problems\". And I an still as devoted as I waas before just I got work a little more. Ready and waiting to read the next great chapter.

P.S
Again sorry that I haven\'t been able to read/review, for the past few days.

what?! k... i\'m anxious to see what\'s next...
wtf is Shinwa doing?! he is suppose to be for Yuki, dammit!
or was her New Year\'s charm that bad of a fortune? geez.
i don’t care what anyone else say, Yuki is a captive character.
there’s begun to be a concern for her overdue prospers.
ya don’t miss Yuki somewhat when she’s gone but you’re rooting for her
when thing’s rule out to be unfair, with her catching the flack. (not in Ch.35-
she came up with a good idea for Fuji thankfully)

well written as usual, Solly, the dialogue was ace.

cliff hanger, hopefully in the next chappies there\'s
gonna be some \'splainin\'!

:-*

[P:S - \" Shai was promised the best fortune of them all,
while Fuji came in a close second.
Yuki’s was full of heartache and Danko and Kaori’s just looked grim.\"

wait, was that a foreshadow? ... don\'t answer that. hehe]

I\'ve just read all 36 chapters of this story today in one sitting. I couldn\'t break myself away from it! I absolutely love it! Characters, plot, story flow-Wonderful. I am eagarly awaiting chapter 37, and I\'m anticipating more of the story\'s interesting twists and turns that you seem to create in every chapter! More, soon, please!

i knew it! i knew Shai\'s father was Fuji\'s as well!
i was thinking about it after reading Ch.35 last night.

and the shit hits the fan!

keep up the good work!

“Fuji’s father is dead, Daddy,” Shai said, standing slowly and moving back down the stairs to stand at her dad’s side.

Mr. Taiikuka looked to his daughter and shook his head slowly. His eyes were sad, and for once he began to look his age instead of like a twenty-year-old businessman. “No,” he told his daughter, “he’s not dead.”

Ooou that part was intresting, I wonder hwat he ment by that maybe he could be...Fuji\'s father. Bum bum buuuuuum. The story is becoming confusing though I can\'t tell if Shinwa like \\s Shai or Yuki. Please do update the story is wonderful.

oh...no shinwa and yuki?
....
darn i was hoping

oooh!!! is shinwa going to save yuki? is he going to choose to be with her?? i hope so! at first i thought shai would be with shinwa...but shai has the baby to think about...so maybe that would be the most important thing in her life right now rather then a boy. anyhoo...really getting into this story, can\'t wait for more!

aww i thought shai and shinwa(spelling?) were gonna hook up since that scene where he saved her life and he held her tight, it sounded romantic...yuki just sounds annoying

well i guess shinwa and yuki wouldnt be so bad if as someone said she just got a backbone...stood up for herself...and quit being so happy-go-annoying! they would be a cute match