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Firstly, sorry I\'m too lazy to sign in for a review. Secondly, I can\'t help but feel that Kyoei\'s taking advantage of Shai, whether he realizes it or not. Here we have a pregnant teen who very recently had her heart broken, and she\'s longing for someone to love her. And, convenient enough, here\'s Kyoei. The reason that I\'m complaining is that Kyoei is what I refer to as \'one of the good guys\'. This includes Shai, Yuki, Fuji, Amatsu, Kyoei (duh), Kiseki, the Oshidori parents, and Shai\'s father. Normally, when somebody not on that list has a lapse in morality in this story I disregard it as they are expected to. This, however, was a bit shocking and I must say that I dislike it. By the way, awesome story.

Ok, I\'ve got a little problem. Fuji is unbearably upbeat about what\'s going on in her life. She broke up with her boyfriend and her mom\'s beating her. But it doesn\'t get her down, now she\'s going clubbing! She\'s just ever so happy! And Yuki\'s doing well too, even though her brother raped her sister and tried to rape her. Excellent story, I hope School Girl Stories II is as good.

ok .. so were to start, first i would have never seen this story if it wasn´t by a mistake, because usually i was never in this part of the site ... so ok, when i was here i began to read and then i found your story, that´s when i got obsessed and read the whole thing on one day *sigh*
soo .. i loved it in a way i can only discribe as amazement, the way you described the lives of these people so dramatically and yet so real had me interessted in no time!! i mean how often do you find such a well written story with such a great plot, that if you really think about, happens in real life? i say, not often and to find one of this rare stories was one of the best things to ever happen to me! i was happy when the peopple in the story were happy, sad when they were sad and angered as well! Also this whole thing sounds like film or a documantation and i don´t know if there is more to say, but i will definatally read the other story to this
one last thing to make you blush even more, the story was just awesome, breathtaking and excellently written!
c ya, krissi

AWWWWW! Yeah I WAS wondering about that but hey thing still did make sense! lol haha. Thanks!!!!

Thanks for the character descriptions! Helps a lot to have a thorough one =) Much appreciated.

HOLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DO I LOOVE THIS STORY!!IM SO GLAD YOUR MAKIN\' A SEQUAL!!One of the best OC Fiction ive ever read in my life!!The whole Japanese vibe to it was just ...I loved it!! lol,you truly did everything with taste,the whole Nakago and Kaori i loooveedd,it was sweety in a sick kinda way,lol!Fuji and Amatsu need to have more \"getting laid\" moments,and I cant wait to see what happens with Shinwa and Yuki looking very forward to it!You did an amazing job with this fic,your plot is just excellant and well thought out,so I congratulate you!I truly adored this story,I actually read it yesterday and finshed today!And im a really sloooooww reader.

LOVED IT!!Cant wait for to read the sequal!

So when are you to post the new series of stories. Pls give a link from this seris to the other, like the name so we know what to look for. Realy good i think it\'s going to be great to see what\'s going to happen to everyone in new enviorments. And i can\'t wait to read all of your brand new stories. This is was realy good, and long i love that everything came together and yet it didn\'t completly. Leting you be able to write the other series. Pls email me if you get a chance



Hoping to read your new stuff very soon,
Love always,
CrazzyGirl99

Though I strongly dislike incest, I was forced to read this by a friend of mine, and for the past few weeks, I have been suprised at the quality of these random fics. I have to say, that Nakago is by far the most inventive character I have seen in almost any category. Good job. You have alot of talent, and don\'t forget it.

Wooh! I\'m very happy for Kaori and Nakago! ^^ I feel bad for Danko still, though. But, oh well. (:

I can\'t wait for Shai to have her baby! And, Mr. Tennison should just like...die...yeah... that would be nice.. lol...but don\'t do that...because I\'d cry. @_. ANyways, go YUKI! Yay! -still favors her- Eh, what can you doo. That\'s sad that Fuji is going to an all girl\'s school. Hopefully she\'ll still be in the sequel? Can\'t wait for it, by the way. (:

You wrote a very nice story, and I couldn\'t help but follow it till the end. You didn\'t just focus on the pure sexual relations of the girls, like most authors tend to do, but went off in different directions that made your story more enjoyable to read. I hope I see more of them soon, and great work! Thank you for making me read ^^