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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found you looking through the users on B\'s Wolfe board..... I really like the start to your story. I see it has been a couple months since you wrote the first 2 chapters. I hope you will write more!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wheres the rest of it?! *poutyface* this has the potential to be an awesome(excellent, great) story
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEEEEEEE!!!!! update this story:))) i love it!!!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I had written you before because I really liked your character development. And I was wondering if yoiu were planning to continue or whether, I should stop looking for the next chapter?
I really think you have talent,
cheryl
I had written you before because I really liked your character development. And I was wondering if yoiu were planning to continue or whether, I should stop looking for the next chapter?
I really think you have talent,
cheryl
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Coming along very nicely, if a little brisk, but as I said the feelings are there and the characters are plausible.
Eagerly awaiting developments
Blue
Eagerly awaiting developments
Blue
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! i love this story so much i cant wait until until the next chapter comes up:):):)
keep up the great work
-Amber
keep up the great work
-Amber
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sweet, if a little short. write more soon.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I\'d point out to you that you are changing names around, in the first paragraph you used \'Tyler\' then the letter was signed by \'Travis\'. Other than that I think the story has potential. Keep it up! ;)
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to be a pain of a reviewer, if you scan down your first chapter, half way down the page you just missed one \'travis\' to be changed to tyler. I do like your story, can\'t wait for the next instalment :)
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i thought id give the one comment some company! But ummm i cant wait to see what happens when she accepts his offer (im assuming she does) i hope so anyway the tension would be great and poor Travis wouldn\'t have to suffer on his own trying to deal with the memories of Amanda. :)