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I loved that way yo wrote that it was funny and it was good. And she got on the wrong plane lmao. Totally not nice we all wanted a hot secret.

Well....seeing as how I\'m FROM West Virginia, this is a bit offending, but the writing was well done. Like I said, I\'m biased, and personally....sick of the damn stereotype we seem to be getting. Heh...although, I\'m from the northern part of the state. I REALLY can\'t vouch for the southern. XD

THAT WAS FLIPPIN HILARIOUS!!!! I LOOOOOVE THE \"secret\" AT THE END!!! TOO FUNNY! AND THE ACTUAL STORY IS \"HOTT!\" tho i wish you would have gone into more detail about them playing \"doctor\" and everything... but other than that, FABULOUS!

I loved incest and this was both funny and sexy at the same time.

Write more!

Good, very good. I liked it *claps* You could have done a little more work on your syntax however. There were a lot of comma splices, but other than that, terrific!

LMAO! I\'m so like, anti-incestful but MY GOD! Lmfao! This was just the best thing ever (: Kinda makes me pro-incestful xDD...-is sad- ANyways, I really liked the authors way of talking (perhaps to your own extent, that\'s how you associate?) Anyways, lol, I actually live in Idaho! >< I read that and i was like \"No! WAY! Idaho is so not that bad!\"
Lol, a lot of people from Cali like to move up here (:
(I live in Couer D\'Alene, just so you know. (:)
It isn\'t so bad up in Idaho, it\'s actually kinda nice. We got Tubb\'s hill here, and Silverwood (which is really a great park thing xD) and... grass... and the lake\'s....a nd the rivers... and the hugest resort I\'ve ever seen. lol... never been in it though. Well, no, that\'s a lie, I have to go to Beverlys to sign my brother up for this reservation thing for christmas... lol...not really in connection with teh story, so as a last tribute,
YOU ROCK!

Very funny! Please do keep writing. :)