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Fantastic story, dark, atmospheric, and disturbingly erotic.

Kudos to you sir.

wow

What a sad story. It was very well written. Good job.

Well, this story was very well written. That is why when i saw you had written i read it, other wise i would not have.

Indeed- very sick. But I like it a lot. The twistes sex with his daughter made me very sick- when she was with him, his limp penis inside of her... It was too much for me- terrible that that happened.

However- I couldn\'t tell at the end of that last chapter if she and Jessie were lesbians or anything of that sort. It would have been a very interesting development, as mostrape victims like that fear the opposite sex and end up having twisted thoughts towards their friends- believeing they are in love because of the positive affection.

However- the end of this short story was VERY well done. Absolutely wonderful. I loved that last line too \"Fuck you, fuck You all. I\'m carrying his child.\" and then she kills herself. You did a WONDEFUL job expressing the surprise, that last paragraph was amazingly well done, as well as the rest of the story.

I love forward to seeing more of My Sisters Innocence as well, I like both versions.

^_^

Whoa...
Very twisted.

Love your stories! Time to write more.

Wow, what an awesome story. I enjoyed it completely!

holy shit that was fuckin sick!! It was sick in a good way too... maybe..idk... it was good but...god.. how the hell do you come up with things like that? I would hate to see what you think about and dont write for other people to read god.

Wow, that story was intense. It was sick and I liked it. You are a great writer. I look forward to reading your other works.