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December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What does your disclaimer mean when you say "snap the young's minds"? I find it a tad confusing. Anyway, this is very good. Your writing is detailed and intense. It has a psychological piece that is just thought provoking enough without reminding you too much of the debauchery that it ruins the sexiness od the erotica sections with the reality of the actual situation.
Great writing. I would love to talk sometime. My email is luffy_sp@yahoo.com
Great writing. I would love to talk sometime. My email is luffy_sp@yahoo.com
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sick. Very sick. Yet for some reason ...
I loved it.
I loved it.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love your twisted mind. write more.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, pretty twisted, sad ending, but then again after that kind of situation a happy ending would have been quite hard to write. Well written even if sick and twisted :)
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story! Very Intense.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story. It\'s sad. I feel very sorry for all the characters in the story. Except, I suppose the father. But then, there\'s always a cause and an effect isn\'t there?
Keep up the good work!
Katrina
Keep up the good work!
Katrina
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my god! This story was just great! It was so gripping and thrilling. I was crying at the end! Bravo on your great and supsenseful story!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally don\'t read stories this dark. I can\'t describe it as being good or bad. It was an interesting read, though.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I found this pretty captivating for the little while it took to read...what can I say? I guess I like how it might hint at the horrors a sexually abused teenager might go through. Maybe it was a little bit simplistic at times, like how the father got away with it, letting so many people in on it, but I guess it\'s plausible, and maybe that part doesn\'t matter as much. Nice.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinkblink* Holy Fucking Shit (No pun intended) This story was amazing. superbly written. Rape stories are hard to write, hard to get the realness in them. But, you described it perfectly, as if you watched it on television, and was simply relaying what someone had told you had happened... I..can\'t get over it. Cicely, was an astounding character.