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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read the original version of this story and was very impressed by it. This is already better. Can\'t wait to see the rest of it.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually like thi one better, from the looks of it. But then can\'t really say anything until it\'s dne or something like that...