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Well Cac, the unfortunate fact of the matter is that I can\'t abandon this one. I was merely speaking in terms of posting it online. This is the one that the editor is interested in, not the others, so this is the one that gets worked on the most. I may pick up Twist again at some point, but there\'s not going to be a sequel to Rebel, purely because when I *do* write the sequel it will fit into the format I\'ve created for this one. *shrugs* I just don\'t have the time to do one all in Jefferson\'s pov and then rewrite it for the book. Sorry!

I do hope to finish up Twist, like I said, I\'m just not sure when I\'ll have the time.

i know that jefferson was \"mentored\' by men but would have loved to have seen another woman on her close knit of friends that include adam and joshua. maybe she would have been turned against her, thus why she was captured. great so far, an intersting approach with using povs. would love each section to be longer because i think, just maybe, that i am in love with chaucer because his description fits my love for the past year. got a kick out of it when he read it. sorry going on a bit...

Oh I don\'t mind reading this story for a second time, though I wouldn\'t be too sad if you dropped it and got on another sequel, perhaps, or even A Twist of Fate...

As to this story, well, it doesn\'t lose to the first version, I think, but it doesn\'t beat it either.

I love this approach to the story. Please please, if possible, give more background on how Kit, Joshua and Adam got together and saved the day. AS much as I really found his story or the bit you wrote about him, whatever happened to Haskell and his piggy self. I know these suggestions/questions deal with the end but I felt a bit hung up on them from the first Installation.

Hmm. It\'s arrainged quite nice, but I\'m seriously biased I\'ve already read and appreciated the first one, and after one time, the new versions just don\'t seem to be able to match up, no matter how good, as long as the first was good. But I\'ll keep reading... though I root more for A Twist Of Fate, the true love of my heart

Well, if it\'s longer than how can I complain? That it will be awhile in completion is a good thing else reading it\'d be like, I know exactly what\'s happening in the next paragraph and stuff.

*laughs* Sorry about that Shai. I thought I\'d been pretty clear about this being an alternate version. There was a sequel planned for the R&G story, but then a few things happened.

I\'ve been in contact with a publisher. Originally it was for the novella version of this that you\'ve already read. But the more we discussed the more I started thinking about turning it into a full novel. The editor for the publisher agrees, so I\'ve been working on transferring it over. The good news is that since it\'ll be a pretty big change from the R&G over in the erotic section, I can probably leave that up. This one is pretty much halted since it\'s closer to what the book will end up looking like.

*smiles* Thanks for your praise though, and while I know you like the R&G version. I really hope that you\'ll take a peek at the finished product. I think it\'s going to be even better. (and not only because it\'ll be longer!)

Cheers,
wig

DAMN IT! You can bet I take back my raving praise of you for having the next sequel out! This is an alterate, and I liked the old one just fine!


You might think you can end The Rebel and The General like you did but you can\'t!!!!!!! Sequel!!!!! - please...

Since I pounded out my thoughtsj the day you moved from the older forum to this forum... I won\'t reiterate.

I love it!