rate_review Reviews

Very well written, even if a lot of it went right past me. I guess it\'s part of a longer story, huh? sounds interesting.

great story! any chance for a sequel?

i completely agree with Link of the Hylians, very well written and nice detail, especially since there wasn\'t too much to bore a reader. The tension was well built too. KEEP WRITING!

Mmm, nice... More would be appreciated.

Hi, it\'s me again - first reveiwer though you\'ll have to take my word for it - and I noticed no one else has reveiwed yet though this is new isn\'t it - but a I know I hunger for reveiws and really ethusiastic ones - to drop the cool thing, I luved this story! So hot, really, eeeee!!! As far as I could tell you don\'t have to continue it, it would do by itself, but I would definately read more.