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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.:blinks:. What I don't get is why your spelling and grammar in your story is worse than this, because poems are technically abstract stories o.o Maybe I'm over-analysing, maybe the sky is green and the grass is pink, or maybe I should just shut-up and start acting decent again.
...Nah XP
It seems to me that the best poems and songs are written when depressed. Of all the songs I've ever written, the ones I wrote when I was highly emotional were the best. 'Course, there were two that I wrote when I had consumed way too much sugar and coffee. I dubbed those songs after their solid item .:nervous laugh:.
Honestly, the spelling and grammar aren't too bad here. Only serious error I can recall is how you got your "Your" and "You're" mixed up. "You're" is the sorta-abbreviation of "You are", it's a conjoined word with an ' replacing the missing letters.
-Elle
...Nah XP
It seems to me that the best poems and songs are written when depressed. Of all the songs I've ever written, the ones I wrote when I was highly emotional were the best. 'Course, there were two that I wrote when I had consumed way too much sugar and coffee. I dubbed those songs after their solid item .:nervous laugh:.
Honestly, the spelling and grammar aren't too bad here. Only serious error I can recall is how you got your "Your" and "You're" mixed up. "You're" is the sorta-abbreviation of "You are", it's a conjoined word with an ' replacing the missing letters.
-Elle