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“Your in the dungeon of my humble home…The Circle of Fears! Welcome my darling!”
Ok that very well could be the most corniest thing in the history of the world. The dialoge in ur story is horrible.

good chapter. beautiful necklace and mansions. update soon plz. i wont be able to review for 6 weeks cuz im going to france. ill give u a big review when i get back.

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hey sorry it took me soooo... long to update, i had some MAJOR computer problems, like my computer kept deleting part 3!!! but my friend, Eric helped me and now my computer is totally fixed! I\'ll update soon!

I think your story is hot, although the beginning of it was a little rushed and not explained. But its long, nice, sexy and if you added in a bit of background before the end i think it would be better.

Wow, i meen Wow. This story is so beautiful but at the same time dark i love Frank his hair is awesome and how you put Gerard as her dad and they are all vampires ok just absolutely awesome. It fits so perfect together for some reason. Your a great writer and good luck with future prodjects (which better include finishing this story, hehe please?!) Great job toodles!

-CHloe

hey guys it\'s me the author I\'m sorry it\'s taking me a while to update I have been studying for exams and test...the next part is almost finished! but turn in the story! sorry for the confusion everything will be explianed in part 3! please, if you have any request tell me and I\'ll put it in! I\'ll uuse all the help I can get...please REVIEW!!!


BYE BYE,..EVIL FAIRIES ROCK!

I\'m lovin this fic so far, plz update soon I wanna know what happens next with Kina and Frank, plz update soon!! thanxs

Hello. *Bows, long dark brown hair falling to cover her angelic face. After a moment, straightening up, and crossing her arms.* Well, I dont really know what to say about this story, its good if its your first time I guess, but if I may, I would like to give a little creative critasism. Anyways here goes. First off, its always good to have nice long chapters, in my oppinion those were way too short, but oh well that I will just have to deal with. Ok, second You dont have to take most of the paragraph to describe every single detail, and then to top it off give a link to a picture right in the middle of the story? You could of just gave the links at the end of the storys. And im wondering, if she is being forced to get married to this william fellow, then why has he invited her father, and the clan? I mean, isnt he trying to take power away from Gerard (Big big fan by the way.) Why would he invite the people that could ruin everything he has worked to make happen? Why would he invite people that were fighting with him when this girl was nine. And how come she couldnt remember that whole thing from when she was nine? I mean, I remember pleanty from when I was nine years old. And whats with all the pictures of her family, and that guys enemy in his house? I dont really get that one, why would he even want her to know her father, and why would he even tell her about the person she is really suppose to be with, if it was me, but its not im just saying if it was, I would have her figure this thing out by herself, and not have people telling her the obvious answers to the mystery. Ok, well I have said my piece, I shall review anouther time, im not trying to be mean or anything, this is just how I review, I tell it like it is. *Nods, turns on her heal, and heads out the door to read anouther fic.*

hey! i really love where this is going. i love my chemical romance. you\'re great at writing! update soon!!!! it\'s so cool how you put amy lee in there too.

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