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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
,uy bueno e interesante, ana maria
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot. I just recently wrote a story like that. This has given me inspiration for a possible addition to my story
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have a real talent for descrption! I really loved the line, \"discarding the remnants of war, his sword, his armour, leaving them to die of age in the dark, moistness of the forest floor.\" Lovely!
I do think you could have carried that through the sex scene itself a bit more. It was really beautifully and sensually written, but I didn\'t feel like your originality came through quite as well as in the first few paragraphs.
But overall, a beautiful, (and hot!) fic! Long live wood nymphs. =)
I do think you could have carried that through the sex scene itself a bit more. It was really beautifully and sensually written, but I didn\'t feel like your originality came through quite as well as in the first few paragraphs.
But overall, a beautiful, (and hot!) fic! Long live wood nymphs. =)