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by Cri

person angelmay
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
person Con Crit
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Repeat after me: the spell-checker is my friend.

It\'s genius not genious, and it would be \'skin pale as spilled milk\' not \"skin pail as spilt milk\"

Try proof-reading before submitting next time.