rate_review Reviews

I think it\'s good that Val had someone he could trust. I need another update. This one\'s good but I need more. Not trying to rush you or anything.

I love your stories, you have such a gift. The way you bring the characters and their conflicts to life is unbelievable! This story spurred me to read your others and I must say you simply out do yourself with each attempt. I cannot wait for each of your updates nor the sequel to Blurring the Lines as that story truly did wrap me in its tale. Keep up the good work!

ohhh wow.. the tension!!!

Great chapter!!! Always looking forward to the next chapter. Yes Val has redeemed himself but I knew he would I have faith! LOLOLOL Oh and you have too!! LOL

Oh man! Such a relief! I was worried that Val might reject to help Trist. But then it was worth to worry. Val used his ability to shut voices in Trist\'s head by buiding sexual tension and relief b/w them! Very intense!!!! Thanks!

I was so happy that Val wasn’t a complete idiot. I hope that Val can trust the person that their going to, because right now it’s hard to tell the true friends from the not. I hope that this turns out okay.

Ok. I\'m goint to make this really quick and painless:

WOW! And I mean, WOW, WOW, WOW! I stopped being coherent twenty-some chapters ago. This is, by far, the most interesting, well thought-out, intriguing, meaningful, well-developed original slash story I\'ve ever come across with!! I\'m so on the verge of screaming like a bloody fangirl right now, it\'s not even cute anymore! This is... simply amazing! Your main characters are, oh my god, I can\'t even find words to describe it. Val and Trist are simply adorable; I am completely amazed by how well you seem to know these guys, by how much thought, and realism, and humanity you\'ve put into each one of them. These two are real people with their own secrets, and fears, and demons, and vertues; and it\'s simply wonderful to see them growing, to watch their unique personalities affecting and reacting to each other; to witness the slow, developing changes within them (not that Gavan or Eshe are anything less!). You\'ve grabbed a \"supernatural\" theme, twisted it around, and managed to create the perfect soundtrack for this story without compromising its message and credibility. Anyway, to summarize things a bit: I\'m utterly and completely impressed (and that\'s saying A LOT). You are very, very talented. I seriously can\'t wait to read the next chapter, and the next, and the next! :) Hope it won\'t be too long, because as the saying goes, once you start...

Once again, two, four, hell! Infinite thumbs up for you. Excellent, superb job! :D

Take good care,

Etherea.

P.S: If you have an update mailing list, please add me to it, or send me an email when you post next. I\'ll really appreciate it!

u sure did!!

That is some fucked up shit. Is Val so weaked minded that he can see what is right infront of him. Those doctors are playing him like a book.
I love this story. It took a turn that I didn\'t see coming. This should be a movie...seriously.

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I WANT THIS STORY TO WORK OUT...TO BE BALANCE. I WANT TRIST AND VAL BACK TOGETHER.

*huggle* Tis okie. With a story like this, I\'m willing to wait (albeit impatiently ^_~ ) for the next update! Excellent work. And the angst is wonderful! Poor Trist. And Val needs to be smacked. J/K

Excellent writing, as usual. Can\'t wait to see more!

**Zeph**